[3dtrialpractice]

your seats are a lil odd, but anyway, we'll see once all stuff maxwelled...

OHH ya, How odd, is it the Size, Its odd because its the video in with the Renderings
ANY more suggestions Please let me know, would love for this to look right!

CHeers!

-Luke

[3dtrialpractice]

your seats are a lil odd, but anyway, we'll see once all stuff maxwelled...

really THANKS for bringing that up Your so right, they ar Way to short!
The back of the head should touch the abck of the seaat NOt at the neck!

Duhh, i know we needed to get all this out , so dint have time to bee too pick but the composit iss aaall off, so I have a great opertunity to fix it with maxwell.
Ill also use the video frame by frame as a mxi to see how it lights, but for noise / time I bet the physical sky will rock it, and im gon render dielectics in a sep pass and screen it on.
Ill fix the seat size to fit the passengers now!!! and will help it tons

thank you please give me more suggestions,

cheers
luke

[otacon]

Great render. Only crit is it looks a tiny bit too sharp, but thats really minor.

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[3dtrialpractice]

That first image is very impressive! But... there is something that is just not quite right... I looked for a while before deciding it is the black material color you used on the pilots windows, propeller, wing spar, and tail. I think these are too dark for reality in that light. The nose cone and wing edges look very real in contrast to those other areas. but I am nitpicking

Wonderful thank you for adding your crit, I will get on this and change these materials asap.. looking at it now the black on the wing struct and the nose cone are way to flat and dark your right, and also the seal arounthe doors will get a slight grey plastic feel to it.

also note that i updated it on page 1 with just a longer camera lens and too awythe sharpness ont he wing edge that also made it look not quiet right.

thanks you so much for guiding me to new changes!!

-Luke