[Matthias Wirth]

Hi

i post here my renderings - i hope you like it

Apartmenthouse MW 1.6.1 01-2008


Familyhouse MW 1.6.1 01-2008


Familyhouse - Mw 1.5 - 12-2007


Two Familyhouse - Mw 1.5 - 10-2007



thanks for your feedback

matthias

[Hervé]

hey... could be nicer... work on the house textures a little more.. but there is one thing that kind of ruin the render... The lawn... !
I really advise you to take a look at this tutorial... your render would be a perfect candidate..

(the trees are ok..)

http://www.maxwellrender.com/forum/view ... hp?t=20883

cheers
H.

[Bubbaloo]

Building and lawn furniture look good!
The "decorations" of the scene bring the render down a bit.
I've never been a fan of pasted in trees and vegetation.
The ones you have chosen don't have good edges.
I agree on the lawn.
Scattered grass planes would be a huge improvement!

[Matthias Wirth]

Hi
# Hervé thanks for your tipp

# Bubbaloo i know - the 2D trees is the problem
i have xfrog in my office but the texturing from
the xfrogtrees in maxwellstudio is a big problem

thanks for you feedback

matthias

[Matthias Wirth]

Hi

i post a new house

Matthias

[Hervé]

Nice house.. but the roof is a bit strange.. very big tiles....

[Bubbaloo]

New rendering looks good!
What is that material on the roof?

[Matthias Wirth]

Hi

# Hervé thank you

# Bubbaloo when you will i can send the roofmaterial

the roofpage is www.creaton.de productname domino

or erlus productname linea

http://www.erlus.de/index.php?lg=de&css ... true&art=3

matthias

[Matthias Wirth]

New Renderings

Matthias

[Bubbaloo]

Plant's edges are looking much better.
I think you could still use some better grass, though.
Keep it up!