[Guns_888]

Not aiming for photo-realism but for a good quality conceptual sketch.

c&c's welcome.
nick/

[JCAddy]

Pretty darn cluttered if you ask me.

I would say lose the white trees and make the people semi transparent if you're keeping them.

[mgroeteke]

hey, very nice!! just wondering if that black vertical 'core' plane in the left building couldn't be less 'heavy'? maybe with some structure? it's focussing attention too much imo. nice contrasts of black people with that 'glassy' vegetation and intelligent use of translucent people for indoors...

cheers

markus

[glebe digital]

If the trees were a subtle green shade it'd make all the difference for me, and they'd be less confused with the people.
Nice job though............like it.

[Bubbaloo]

I don't like certain elements of it, but I can see that alot of work went into it. I certainly commend you for that. If the client likes it, that's what matters. The biggest thing for me is the 3-point perspective. Did you experiment with the shift lense? Anyway, good job!

[ivox3]

Perhaps it is a little too busy ..., but the nice elements are numerous. Remember, when there's less visual 'noise', the sounds you would want others to hear can come through with greater clarity, ...like a bell as it were and you have a pretty bell here.

I'd keep experimenting with the style ...

[pwrdesign]

I think this is a great image!
A bit crowded perhaps but as Bubbaloo sais, if the client likes it, go for it.

The only thing that feels abit "flat" for me is the black part on the top of the building.

/ P

[Guns_888]

Thanks for comments guys.

Time constraints placed huge pressure on me to get the image finished quickly and now that the deadline has passed and I have time to revisit, I can see that in fact the image is a little overcrowded.

If I have the time I will post an updated image.

Cheers,
nick/