[Leonardo]

what's that metal stick under the toilet paper?? I hope it's not to purge someone's anu$ ... no really, what is it?

[Tora_2097]

Hi sandykoufax,

A few things that might improve your image:

To me your image appears unpleasing in terms of colorchoice. Especially the green towel is very distracting. Try to bring a consitant color scheme into your image. For example a domitating or lead color (possbile the red ceramic) and 2 or three fitting sidecolors. You almost have it but the green is like a punch in the face.
Both towels look very unnatural folded. The wrap around the metal ring is alright but they spread by far too much at the bottom.
You should rework some scale issues (already mentioned).
The toilet paper looks very unnaturaly torn.
You might want to consider a little rework on your light setup. In case you are after a nice magazine shot style you would't want to have such sharp, hight contrast, hard lights.
Keep up the good work,

Benjamin

[markps]

Great render....

Check the scale of your elements... I think the hand towels are too big and a few other elements are out of proportion..


Hey the floor's tile is exactly the same of my own bathroom!

[sandykoufax]

Thank you so much friends.

SunlightRocker, thanks for the tip. Ok, I'll try it. and thanks too Frances.

Leonardo, . yes maybe it's not a purge stick. In fact, I don't know what it is.

markps, thank for your advise.

Benjamin, I heartily thank you for your advises.

Maybe I passed over the important thing : color. I just stick to reality.

Allright, I should have pay more attention to make scene even though it's a tiny things.


and here is overnighted rendered image.

[markps]

great closeup ... the tile's grout and hand towel texture is amazing... and the lighting over the sink is A+!.. I would only change teh hand soap.. it looks a little faded maybe that's because of the SL you've reached.

I liked a lot the water drops... but maybe they seem a big to perfectly spaced.. but they look great anyway!

[SunlightRocker]

Wow, the waterdrops is really cool. How did you do them? One by one? (or is it easy in your app, whatever you are using?)

[sandykoufax]

Thank you friends.

SunlightRocker, I made it with 3dsmax scatter function.

First, made one waterdrop and apply scatter.

and then, convert to editable poly and modify some drops by moving vertex.

and add some linear polygon object.

That's all.

but my drops are a bit big as markps' comment.

[SunlightRocker]

Okey, sound pretty easy.

[tom]

Very nice scene sandykoufax!

In fact, I don't know what it is.

Ugh!

[Tora_2097]

Hi there,

I made a little towel myself and would like to share it with you. Maybe someone interested.



http://www.ag-systems.net/download/towel.mxs
http://www.ag-systems.net/download/towel.obj

[sandykoufax]

wow, thanks tom and benjamin.

and benjamin, thank you for share your file.

what kind of method did you use to made it? cloth? simcloth? or reactor or others??

[Tora_2097]

Hi sandy,
It was made via the cloth modifier within 3ds max 8.

[sandykoufax]

Thanks for the info, benjamin.

[markps]

ooh I'm sorry I didnt' mean big... I was going to say " A bit too perfectly spaced", since they are covering the entire sink and perfectly spreaded....

The drops are awesome and not too big..!

[sandykoufax]

Ooooops!! sorry markps. I misunderstood your comment for my poor english.