[sandykoufax]

Hehehe

It's my last work( not commercial, but just a etude ).

Rendertime is about 10hours and smapling level is 13.3

C&C welcome.

Thanks.

[ivox3]

Sandy ........you working too hard?

I'll be honest, .....it's not the usual Koufax quality.

bottle material: needs to be more porcelain like, ...is that anistropy on it?
bottle bottom: too square
box: too boxy
floor: flatish

....and knowing you ....that cap is pefectly modeled ( like I remember them to be) .....maybe a closer-in shot that would illustrate the modeling would be nice. You could still frame a shot with the shallow dof, ...currently the subject is losing signifigance in the overall frame.


You can hit me later .......

Peace !

[sandykoufax]

Oh, Chris. Thank you for your good advises as always.

and I'm ashamed for low quality.

Nowadays, I have not much time to play with maxwell.

Therefore I got more lazy.

OK, I'll try to upgrade my image quality than quantity.

Thank you again.


PS) I want to know about your screensaver.

[ivox3]

Alright Sandy, .....sorry, I wasn't beating you up, .....but I was beaing you up.



Thanks for reminding me about the screen saver........

I'll get back to you on that shortly. ..... just busy.

[Thomas An.]

Hi Jeong-ho,

You got some candid advice from Chris, so I have nothing to add (Chris, leave something for us )

Also, I am not sure why we would find an "Old spice" on the floor (... no big deal though)

btw, is the background full geometry ? ... or HDRI ?

[Voidmonster]

What Chris said -- but I think the image will be really cool once the textures are a bit better!

Thomas -- it's Old Spice. For sailors. Sailors get drunk and fall down. It makes perfect sense that it would be on the floor.

[glebe digital]

Yeah pretty high alcohol content in old spice.............can't vouch for the taste though.

[DrMerman]

It doesn't taste good

[ivox3]

It doesn't taste good

You probably didn't have a wedge of lime. You have to use a wedge of lime or your just not doing it right.

[Thomas An.]

People will do anything for a drink ... I saw an autopsy report (was it doctor G ?) someone was drinking Listerine (mouthwash), for years ...

[sandykoufax]

hahaha, guys. Thank you for you comments and interesting opinion about drink, but I don't like drinking.

At first, I don't intend to make a old spice in this scene.

Originial scene is this.



But I feel something empty, then I put old spice(my old model) on the floor.

Maybe you can see it in my gallery.

And Thomas,

the outside background of window is not geometry not HDRI, just a clipmapped plain.

Thanks again.

[maxtage]

Hello?

Finally,You made it!

Always cool stuff!

See ya

[sandykoufax]

Thanks, maxtage!!