[shen.de]

hi guys... just wanted to show u my latest pic...
overall worktime was 10hrs. I got inspired from a scene in the latest IKEA catalogue here in germany ... hope u like it!



greets shen.de

[tom]

Very nice Oliver!

[shen.de]

thanks tom glad to hear that u like it...

[iker]

Very beautiful!

[4 HeRo]

Beautiful Indeed

[x_site]

wow stunning!!!

[zent]]

Very slick, looks very comfy. The materials look fantastic

[numerobis]

yes, very nice photo! great materials!
Only the alignment of the background is a little bit disturbing...

[morbid angel]

I think its pretty good. I think the backwall with the window needs some work though. Otherwise looks pretty cool.

[simmsimaging]

Looks good! Background scene needs a tweak for perspective and exposure, but otherwise very well done.

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[pwrdesign]

Very nice!
If I would like to change something I would add some "life" to the floor.

/ patrik

[DIA]

Hi ! I here almost everyday to see something new coming up in the gallery but there is not often i get impressed.
Not this time either ...

The lightning is bad in the scene and its feels very "dead". I should have put some more "power" in the lightsources. Mayby ad some extra light from the camera direction or so.

Also work on your materials they need some refreshments;)

Regards

Dia

[shen.de]

The lightning is bad in the scene and its feels very "dead". I should have put some more "power" in the lightsources. Mayby ad some extra light from the camera direction or so.

sorry that u don't like it... on the lighting I just tried to stick to the ref pic

[insomnia3d]

Shen.de
Don't listen to him. Must have had a bad day
No offense DIA

There are some areas of the rendering such as the coffee table that are obviously very nicely done and look the part. A couple of things that might help you achieve a better result:
_Definitely change or modify the picture outside, maybe adjust the levels and blur it so that it will be on a different plane.
_The drapery needs some sense of support, not sure if that line is it but it needs to be more obvious.
_The floor seems too bare even foe a bare floor, some indication of joints, tiles, whatever you think the ref. pic is showing. Also some rough reflections and highlights will help.
_Add a couple of pillow to hide the further arm of the couch, seems to abrupt, and even maybe a throw on the closer arm.
_Maybe a Small crouwn molding to accentuate the ceiling.
_Check the emitters that are illuminating from the outside, if u are using any. The ceiling could use a bump and a more gradient shadow to it.

Other than that your materials look well applied and it is definitely a good composition, much better rendering that a lot I have seen around. Now that you have this strong base rendering some small additions and tweaks will give you a picture perfect one.

Hope this helps, Great Job

[DIA]

Insomnia3d i had no bad day.. you put images in this gallery for a reason right ? Critics ... and that was my critics i really didnt think it was a good render..sry but i like to say what i think and dont follow everybody else. Just because you use maxwell it doesnt mean you have a brilliant render.

To Shen.de..

Take it right m8 ... that was my opinion and if you look a round a bit for interior renders you see it needs alot of work.
Either you hate me or love me

Good luck ! i think it can be a great interior render in the end.

/DIA