[jjgraphics]

Finally the end of my first V1.0 project.
Image was rendered on a amd X2 4400 in 6h 30' S.L. 11.
I'm waiting for your critics...

This is image in full size 2560x1810 : http://www.jjgraphics.it/gallery/Vista-Sud.jpg



Ciao
Gianluca

[jonathan löwe]

except from the fence in the front i like it!! nice glas-brick-wall and nice plaster-texture...

the windowframes could need a little fine-tuning and the bushes in the left corner are a little flat...

nevertheless, very impressive!

[Miles]

Fantastic.

Only thing I can find to criticise is that the block patterning of the road is too regular

[zoppo]

very good. i like those 60s style elements like the glass blocks and the round roof. perfect texturing and lighting and fine matching vegetation.

the only negative thing is - as mentioned above - the fence. too dark by far.

could you show a wireframe?

edit: two small things seen in the full size pic - the material of the pole with the trashbin looks like plastic and the sign post seems to be some kind of precious metal.

[Maxer]

Nothing wrong with the modeling that I can see however I think you need to increase your light levels, it's very dark.

[jjgraphics]

Hi to everybody and thanks for the critics ...

Unfortunately color of fence, depends by architect and him want a fence like black plastic...

Instead light of image, on my monitor , is a little dark, because if you like the upper right corner is arriving a thunderstorm...

[jonathan löwe]

i was talking about that strange fence in the very front, the wire-netting-one

the black one is ok for me...

best regards
jona

[jjgraphics]

Ah ok, fance is a 3D model that arrive from an old RC5 project without clipmap.

Pole of trashbin, is really plastic like, because have a thin of plastic to protect it...

Instead pole of sign, now that I saw better, it's too reflective....

[rosariogigliotta]

ciao complimentoni che tipo di mappa hai usato per il bump dell'intonaco????

[Mattia Sullini]

Ehilà gianluca, congrats, great work (even if only a little bit of the aged copper roof is visible...!)

[Mattia Sullini]

Ehilà gianluca, congrats, great work (even if only a little bit of the aged copper roof is visible...!)

Just a couple things that maybe could be corrected...(la storia della pagliuzza mia e delle travi degli altri non l'ho mai capita); since it seems to be an archicad output shouldn't be too much work for you to make windows frames and blinds thinner. In second place foreground doesn't hold with the building in quality....maybe some trees (!) would help

[jjgraphics]

Thanks Mattia, I hope to post as soon as possible another image with different point of view...

bye
Gianluca

[CJElven]

I think the stucco-type material looks horrible...but that's me. I can't STAND that material. There's a new apartment building near campus that went up with that, and it's disgusting. Now, yours looks realistic...I just can't stand the material.
The fence looks...strange. Very strange. It think it's the lack of highlights, even though the sun is coming from a direction that would produce plenty of them. Even a matte-black finish would have highlights. Very DULL highlights, but they would be there.
Otherwise, very good. I agree that the sidewalk could use a little work...it detracts from the rest of it. Keep up the work.