[looni]

hi everyone
my new work with maxwell, but now with beta version

[iandavis]

Nice render, though I would like to see it baked a bit more...

The angle could be a bit more dynamic, perhaps at 'people' level, but overall, it's a really strong image both in modelling and texture... the weakness would be (if I had to choose) in lighting. Looks a bit 'flash lit'

[ivox3]

looni,

I think it's okay.....angle is not my favourite. Suggestion: just cut the angle a little like Ian said ...and back it up a little. Just a little too close. Compose your shot a little better.(see link) I like the blue and general colorations, but the floor from my monitor looks too dark.
Last thing, ...... the map of the symbols doesn't seem to follow the crease/textile seams. That's nit picky --- call it like i see it.

.....shall we do it again? ......your call.

grade: C+ ...maybe B- .......i3.

http://asp.photo.free.fr/Composition/ph ... lass.shtml

[looni]

thank you iandavis and i will correct camera angle

thanks ivox3 and i agree about the floor it's e bit dark and i will correct it too. Thanks again friends