[gadzooks]

So now that i am UN-employed and looking, and looking, and looking for work, I decided to total re do a former project for my portfolio. I would like to hear from you guys as to what you think. Lot of stuff to fix but just wanted to get an idea if I am heading in the right direction.

[m-Que]

Sorry to hear about your work...
As for the project - I really like the beginning.

[Tok_Tok]

Nice start! It's already looking very realistic!

I can't find anything that's not looking good, except for the noise

[Bubbaloo]

It's a great start! They will look like photos if you add more details, details, details.

The lighting could be more dramatic I think. It looks a little drab and overcast. If you are using an HDRI environment, you can create a small sun disk in the hdri in photoshop and over expose it a little to get harder shadows. I've done this before with some success.

[ivox3]

You know Bubba, ... sometimes the sun doesn't shine.

gadzooks -- Looks good to me, .. a bit higher in the SL's though.

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Hint: Don't look for work, ...make the work. That's all I'm gonna say...

[djflod]

hell yeah thats a nice start ... this will look great at the end

[RobMitchell]

Love the composition and angles. Should be a very impressive set of renders when complete.

[gadzooks]

Thanks to everyone who gave me feed back on these. Should have some final renders up in a few minutes. Thanks gadzooks