kitchen-personal work-updated 21-05-07

kitchen-personal work-updated 21-05-07#225607

By devista - Sun May 20, 2007 1:50 am

- Sun May 20, 2007 1:50 am #225607

just a kitchen. First shot. C&C please.

saludos
luis

Last edited by devista on Mon May 21, 2007 8:42 am, edited 1 time in total.

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#225618

By michaelplogue - Sun May 20, 2007 5:37 am

- Sun May 20, 2007 5:37 am #225618

Very nice. However, it looks like your post work with the background messed up the bottle on the table by the window. I'd also blur the background image a bit do give it a bit more of a DOF feel. Also, with the wood above the sink, I'd give each board a separate UV map (each one offset differently) so the grain doesn't run from one to the other. There should also be some reflection of the kitchen/dining room on the window (if there is a window). For some tips on how to do this in post, I did a quick tutorial which may help:

http://www.maxwellrender.com/forum/view ... c&start=15

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#225624

By insomnia3d - Sun May 20, 2007 5:46 am

- Sun May 20, 2007 5:46 am #225624

Good job. The wood looks great. i would add a lot more shine to the red, closer to what you did on the lamp. Maybe even ad some glass/stainless cabinet doors.

#225635

By simmsimaging - Sun May 20, 2007 7:06 am

- Sun May 20, 2007 7:06 am #225635

Looks good. I agree you could tweak that bottle where it crosses the window, and your outdoor shot seems a bit warm for the interior I think. You could cool that off or warm up your interior so they sit better together.

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#225648

By jomaga - Sun May 20, 2007 11:13 am

- Sun May 20, 2007 11:13 am #225648

Great render Luis!
Muy bueno, eres una maquina

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#225657

By iker - Sun May 20, 2007 3:07 pm

- Sun May 20, 2007 3:07 pm #225657

Great again!

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Buen resultado si señor!

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#225677

By devista - Sun May 20, 2007 8:17 pm

- Sun May 20, 2007 8:17 pm #225677

thxs

. I´m working with the botle, the background (michaelplogue great tutorial) and some changes tomorrow more images.
Gracias chiquillos

saludos
luis

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#225709

By devista - Mon May 21, 2007 8:42 am

- Mon May 21, 2007 8:42 am #225709

some changes and a night shot.

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#225719

By contact7 - Mon May 21, 2007 9:52 am

- Mon May 21, 2007 9:52 am #225719

Brilliant work! Loved the red material you used.

#225720

By wingwalker - Mon May 21, 2007 9:53 am

- Mon May 21, 2007 9:53 am #225720

Nolte?

#225721

By Fernando Tella - Mon May 21, 2007 9:54 am

- Mon May 21, 2007 9:54 am #225721

It's looking good so far. It still needs more "things" on the right side as it looks a bit empty there.
Also I think the point of view is a bit confusing; I would make two shots for this kitchen or choose another a bit more from the left that tells a bit more of the back space.

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