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By yadikrisnadi
#204174
Design was done by other, please give me input to improve the images before finalized. Pendant & Desk light by Siger Evermotion. Thanks.

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By superbad
#204180
Are you unhappy with something specifically? Those are quite good renderings once you get past the Kim Jong-il design.
By yadikrisnadi
#204181
Thanks Superbad, quick response, I am happy, but it seem not realistic (image first & second). I dont know why, Any one?
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By Mihai
#204183
You could add some reflections to the piano, it takes up a pretty big area of the image and it's in the center. The lighting seems a bit too even in that second pic, or is it really supposed to be like that?

Quite nice renderings :)
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By ivox3
#204186
thanks jd, ... Nothing special, ..and I'm sure it could have probably been done a little nicer, ...but I thought the image's 'unreal' quality was the result from the saturation and wanted to give a quick example to help.
By yadikrisnadi
#204187
Miha: Thanks for your input, I working on lighting and material for piano.
Ivox3: You are right, much better. Thanks.
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By Thomas An.
#204189
They seem like decent renders. The first two have a yellow cast, but it is possible that the real life counterpart would look like that as well (given the wall/floor colors and the emitters).
The third one looks much better, because the blue hue of the sky breaks the monotony.
yadikrisnadi wrote:Miha: Thanks for your input,
:)
Its Mihai. Mihai !
(pronounced: Me-High)
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By tom
#204195
Great interiors!
By yadikrisnadi
#204214
Jd, Thomas An, Tom, thank you.
By Maya69
#204279
nice work

My opignon

for the second and three image your windows light is too small

i think the mixed beetwwen interior and sky is not good

try to up expose for give a brightness of windows

for me this a great works
By yadikrisnadi
#204404
Hyperballad & Maya69, thanks for your visit. I am trying more work on lighing for image 1 & 2.
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By mverta
#204406
Is all the illumination coming from emitters visible, or off camera in the scene? That is, you're not using any hidden emitters, are you, or anything like that? To me, the lighting looks a bit "cheated," and is flattening things out.

_Mike
By yadikrisnadi
#204432
Thanks mverta, all lights are coming from emiters visible which square plane 4 cmx 4 cm, inside downlight's reflector, 4000 lumen @ 4000K.

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