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By Asmithey
#318188
This is WIP. This is a rendering for a client of their design. Mainly eye wash to get things going.
C and C's welcome.

Thanks,

Aaron

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With some Simulens

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Last edited by Asmithey on Mon Feb 01, 2010 12:11 am, edited 3 times in total.
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By Bubbaloo
#318211
Very nice! I don't like the extreme perspective, though. It distorts the bikes close to the camera too much. I'd render a couple of different views instead of trying to fit it all in one shot. Also, check the smoothing on the floor tiles. They look curved. Are the top faces in the same smoothing group as the sides?

What's with the devil's license plate (666)? :lol:

P.S. Love the bubble-butt girl on the right!
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By Asmithey
#318215
Scary..I did not notice the plates. I am taking that off of there. I purchased that bike model.

The distortion is a bit much but when I changed the viewing angle it eliminated more than they wanted from this one view. My client needed this fast for a quick presentation. We will be doing fine tuning and more views as they work the details of the architecture. So less distortion to come.

Smoothing group..is the 3Ds Max lingo? :)

The girl has some proportion issues I think...Biker chicks!
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By ivox3
#318218
I fail to see any scaling issues with the girl. lol

So, is this a known issue?