[pipcleo]

pre viz for mechanical trades training facility

[djflod]

looks very promising

[JCAddy]

Cool render so far. I also like the architecture.

[polynurb]

Cool render so far. I also like the architecture.

+1..

clean render & nice design, i just don't like these long angled stripes for the facade tiling on the front/left part... if we speak about the arch part of it.. i would go for a grid..

[Mattia Sullini]

Cool render so far. I also like the architecture.

+1..
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+2

[pipcleo]

update

[Tea_Bag]

Great Update! I like the new lighting setup! - The lines in the road are pretty large and need to be made smaller as it makes the cars look out of scale! The trees in the bottom left corner seems odd or out of place!

[-Adrian]

Modern and futuristic, great render.
Wonder if the last shot could benefit from some vignetting.

[philmartin]

Really nice. The only thing that bothers me is the name of the facility. You have the huge numbers inside, which are nice, but you can't read BOX HILL... that well. That area needs some work. Overall enerything else is very good.

[pipcleo]

Thanks for the comments guys..
Client wanted an ants eye view to dramatise the view hence a footpath that is essentially the width of a four lane road.
Buildings line the road opposite so this is the effect that was asked for....
the road is probably one hundred metres wide !
Looking at ways to fix this now ....will post a fix soon

[JCAddy]

I would think the sunlight would be coming from a more obvious angle. Right now the side that faces the camera is all dark, which bothers me.

I think the first image has a better lighting setup and gives a more contrasty interesting image.

[pipcleo]

Final image...
Jcaddy , it is a very late dusk shot that the client demanded...
Phil , signage and internal graphics a la architect.

[pipcleo]

Adrian , agree on vignetting....
This is set to 1000 so I am not sure why the effect is so minimal.
Perhaps it does not function to its best with hdr lighting/backgrounds

[Bubbaloo]

Adrian , agree on vignetting....
This is set to 1000 so I am not sure why the effect is so minimal.
Perhaps it does not function to its best with hdr lighting/backgrounds

Easily adjusted in Photoshop.

I like the image overall. It's a nice arch vis work. Just a personal opinion that blurry cars are too distracting.

[rusteberg]

Adrian , agree on vignetting....
This is set to 1000 so I am not sure why the effect is so minimal.
Perhaps it does not function to its best with hdr lighting/backgrounds

camera angle isn't wide enough to notice significant vignetting. has nothing to do with hdr