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By Asmithey
#291847
This is a work in progress. Hopefully this will be dropped into an aerial photo so please excuse the bad image map surrounding the building. It will go away.

There is still a bit of detail missing still, color and materials to make and fix and lots of landscaping to do. All the landscape I provide but most of the site modeling was done by someone else which I had to rework as it was done in Sketch Up and I use Form-Z.

Any comments appreciated.

Thanks,

Aaron


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By jc4d
#291859
I like it, in overall is very good, I would like to point you little things :)
The image have a brown tone, maybe changing the materials of the "sun beds" to white maybe and the massage tents too you can avoid that brown overall tone.
I would rework the stone walls the tiling is very obvious.
Use more bushes with some colors variations so the grass is not going to look like a plain lawn (little more landscaping).
And of course fill it with life, e.g. people, cars, etc

Cheers
JC
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By JorisMX
#291870
youre loosing some information after that curve, be carefull with the lighter areas, they start to blow away

also, if i may say so, try selective color adj and turn some yellow into the green, your flora is very cyan and kind of oversaturated
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By Asmithey
#291899
Thanks for the comments guys...

No worries Brian. I am going to adjust the exposure a bit in MR. It is a bit dull. It needs some punch. Just not in the green grass and trees :wink:

I have to work on a lot of coloring and materials yet.

Thanks,

Aaron
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By Asmithey
#292091
I can give you the glass. You know I think I got it from the MXM site. In the material there is a layer for refraction and reflection. You just increase or decrease the blending of the reflective layer and you can make it how you want it.

Send me a PM for the material.

Do you want the ultra green grass material too!!!! :roll:

Aaron
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By Asmithey
#292161
More WIP....

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So, is this a known issue?