[bjorn.syse]

Made him a new one.. damn that other kid. damn him.

oh, critique is welcomed!



After fixing some of the rubber and lighting:

[mgroeteke]

very accurate materials and modeling, but maybe a bit underexposed?

rethinking - it could also be that the toy is waiting in a closed room, and later it will be a big surprise for the kid when opening that door...

markus

[Fernando Tella]

Looks very good, but that pedal attracts my attention; it will hit the ground when turning.

[ricardo]

Looks very good, but that pedal attracts my attention; it will hit the ground when turning.

That's half the fun riding such things...

[bjorn.syse]

Haha, yes that pedal will be a pain in the ass. But that's normal in tricycle-world I think..

Might just as well be underexposed. I'll work on that. Thanks for comments!

[sandykoufax]

Nice, very cute bike.

Is that ludenhud's?

[Maximus3D]

Great job on the modeling and the rendering is pretty sweet! (i like the theme)

/ Max

[tanguy]

interesting tricycle aproach lol
but try to be more realistic in the design proportion ! lol
because here it s a tricycle between a cycle and a little caterpillar wich make hale in the ground...
Maybe you create the first "liner tricycle"

good job, i like it man but more light will be cool to see more detail of your bike man

[bjorn.syse]

Thank you for the comments, posting on this forum is a great way of getting critique in order to improve oneself.