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Bedroom

Posted: Thu Nov 17, 2005 4:02 am
by yadikrisnadi
Please C & C.

Image

Thank you.

Posted: Thu Nov 17, 2005 4:33 am
by ivox3
here's my c & c..........
Image

Posted: Thu Nov 17, 2005 4:34 am
by 4 HeRo
Much better :D

Posted: Thu Nov 17, 2005 9:05 am
by macray
It needs some more little details. The room could be real, but the picture is dull. There is no special place highlightened (e.g. a picture at the wall), the textures are nice, but very 70ish. I don't like the texture of the carpet (you should also give him some structure/bump).....

And a rework of the curtains is necessary.

Everything is aligned straight in this room, shuffle it a bit (e.g. turn the "chairs" at the beds end a few degrees that there are NO perpendicular angles between them ....)

Posted: Thu Nov 17, 2005 4:53 pm
by yadikrisnadi
Thanks guys, your comments are very helpfull.

I 'll try another rendering.