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Onslaught's Gallery

Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 2:09 am
by Onslaught
I think it's time for me to start my gallery.......and I hope I can add more stuff to it. :-)

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Re: Onslaught's Gallery

Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2011 10:07 am
by JamesColeman
I think they're great images but I've got a couple of critiques:
Including a human into the scene is a risky manoeuvre, the lack of SSS in the skin always makes them seem flat and unrealistic. The same applies to the plants, without thinSSS they don't look convincing.
To me there seems something odd about the reflection in the refrigerator, I think it's because I expect to see the camera there, and it's not. In any case, the reflection is pretty basic, there isn't anything in the back of the room to reflect.
There's still some visible noise in the images, especially in the second due to the depth of field, what SL did these reach?

I don't mean to sound overtly negative, I think the images are great but a couple of changes could improve them.

Re: Onslaught's Gallery

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2011 1:07 am
by jfrancis
Nice attention to detail.

Don't be afraid of letting some parts go darker.

Window light for the sky is beautiful high Kelvin value blue light. Interior lights are often warm. Enjoy the warm/cool push/pull in the scene, or embrace one light source and eliminate the other. Don't try to make the lights monochromatic white.

My two cents :)