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lightBOX (Update)

Posted: Tue May 10, 2011 3:06 pm
by gadzooks
Since I was laid off a year ago this month, I have been steadily working on adding some new pieces to my portfolio in an attempt to get back into the field of architectural artist. So here is my next one. It's a corporate interior. As always CC more than welcome.

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Re: lightBOX

Posted: Tue May 10, 2011 4:04 pm
by caryjames
Looks very nice and professional - nice graphical layout as well!! Hope that you are not unemployed long!!!

Re: lightBOX

Posted: Tue May 10, 2011 4:16 pm
by NicoR44
Superb work!

Re: lightBOX

Posted: Tue May 10, 2011 5:44 pm
by zdeno
edit: thx for bigger images

Re: lightBOX (Update)

Posted: Tue May 10, 2011 6:17 pm
by NicoR44
With those new uploads it's even more stunning!

Re: lightBOX (Update)

Posted: Tue May 10, 2011 9:03 pm
by JamesColeman
They look great! I wouldn't use the human figures, I find they always stand out as looking fake, I might use translucent profiles if I have to but with scenes like this where scale isn't an issue it's maybe not worth it.
They might need a higher SL as I think I can see some noise still but it might be the textures. Do you remember what SL these are?
And I hope you find a job soon, I know it's no fun!

Re: lightBOX (Update)

Posted: Tue May 10, 2011 11:11 pm
by zdeno
nice work and glad to see some tasty details ;) eg. this steel support for pipes ;)

but something wrong is in lighting in this interior in my humble opinion.

light from sky is very weak opopsing to all other lights . or this is dawn or almost night.

how this "landscape" is made ? IBL ? or just postprocess in phshop ?

on table there is great gloss from artificial light but not from psychical sky . something anonying is hiden here .

but still , great piece of work.

and wall material is too dull. is it from mxmgallery ? or self made? show settings if it is possible

Re: lightBOX (Update)

Posted: Tue May 10, 2011 11:30 pm
by numerobis
very nice work! and thanks for the bigger ones ;)

where are these people from? ...yes, they still look a bit fake, but i think they work quite well for the background.

Re: lightBOX (Update)

Posted: Wed May 11, 2011 3:14 pm
by RobMitchell
Yep, definitely better seeing them full-res. :)

I think these images are fantastic. Like zdeno said, I really like the ceiling rafters. There's some great depth of field use going on, too. I also think they maybe could have done with a bit more rendering time, but otherwise, great work. Good luck on the job hunt.