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Home fragrance & display
Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 7:29 pm
by alexxx_95
Hi everybody,
All is in the title, a home fragrance, perfumed wood stick and perfumed candle on their display.
Comments welcom.
alex
Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 7:36 pm
by iker
The render is great ...but I would try to avoid depth of field where the brand goes ...so I take the first one
Posted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 8:22 pm
by -Adrian
Very nice setup. Just like Iker the first thing that i noticed was the out of focus bottles. I would forget about DoF and use a really high f-stop for this scene.
Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 7:13 am
by Hervé
very nice Alexx... yes no DOF is better..
are you working for Clarins..?
cool..
Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 1:56 pm
by djflod
great ork Alex ... No DOF
Very realistic impression
Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 4:09 pm
by NicoR44
Looking great!!!
djflod wrote:great ork Alex ... No DOF
Very realistic impression
Ork?
Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 4:13 pm
by Hervé
ha ha ha hyou beat me Curt.. I was going to do it too... hehe.. so close.. yet so far... hehe
Posted: Tue Jul 22, 2008 4:20 pm
by djflod
damn ... i'll never start posting right after I woke up
Sorry for that guys *Peace*
Nice post Curt
Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 1:41 am
by Eric Lagman
What are the stripes on the two cylindrical glasses? Is that the polygon mesh causing that faceted look? Everything else looks good.
Posted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 2:25 am
by KurtS
I think the objects are to dark, and the contrast against the white background to hard. Its almost like a silhouette. And I think you need a higher S/L to get rid of the noise.
Posted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 6:57 pm
by alexxx_95
Thanks friends.
Hervé , yes I work for .
Djflod, thanks for the ork
you inspired me my next modelling challenge... a "beautifful" ork
Eric about the stripes.... I really don't know what is it? I don't think its a mesh problem, It's a nurbs model and when I triangulate it with high density... so I don't know
Kurts, you really feel it too much dark, in my screen , all seems ok.Maybe I need to calibrate it. But the dark green part with vegetable cut is right just a silhouette.
thanks again.