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Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 4:24 pm
by gadzooks
Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 4:31 pm
by killian2828
I love those dirty materials. Great job!
Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 5:26 pm
by d7mcfc
Great images. Love the materials. Particularly the floor.
One thing I would say is, I would probably tone down the materials on the books and magazines and confectionary a little. I wouldn't go as far as saying they are ruining the image, just a personal preference thing.
Overall, a great job done.
Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 5:51 pm
by siliconbauhaus
very nice.....makes me think about re-installing maxwell
Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 6:34 pm
by JCAddy
They look great, but when I first saw the second image (first interior image) I thought to myself WTF is that black stuff on the floor?
Once you see the other pics you notice that it's just the reflection though. Maybe tone it down so it's not so reflective in those spots.
Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 6:40 pm
by w i l l
Nice crazy focal lengths.
Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 8:41 pm
by silba
cool camera angles and lens distortions. The floor and books are a little distracting.
Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 8:46 pm
by KurtS
Great work, the text "Kenny J. Syverson" is a little distracting IMO...

Posted: Tue Mar 11, 2008 10:20 pm
by Leonardo
w i l l wrote:Nice crazy focal lengths.
too crazy for me... I think you need to control them a little better. what are you using 18mm? try 32-50mm
and the color of the magazines look too intensive
leo
EDIT-
BTW... looks very nice!

Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 7:49 am
by simmsimaging
Images are great, perspectives are great, the full paranoia status watermark is still not so great
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Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 9:11 am
by martgreg
crazy cool...like all of it...
great colors angles etc.....
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 2:25 pm
by Bubbaloo
Very nice work! The insane perspectives are a little much but that's just my opinion.
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 4:24 pm
by gadzooks
Thanks a million guys! Its amazing what fresh eyes can find wrong with a rendering. After looking at them for weeks you start to not see things like that. it just becomes a blur
The floor will be adjusted as it does look a little odd, dont know what the hell I was smoking that day!!?? As far as the perspective's, I really wanted to push it this time. I have to say one thing about Maxwell .............I love this program! Gadzooks
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 4:45 pm
by bodebodebode
Try to photoshop a little bit your magazines covers textures.
They are just too over saturated, make them a litle less constrastant and you will probably get a better result, a homogen image.
Angles are nice, great job man .... keep up.