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matthias gallery 01-2008 UPDATED
Posted: Mon Nov 12, 2007 11:36 pm
by Matthias Wirth
Hi
i post here my renderings - i hope you like it
Apartmenthouse MW 1.6.1 01-2008
Familyhouse MW 1.6.1 01-2008
Familyhouse - Mw 1.5 - 12-2007
Two Familyhouse - Mw 1.5 - 10-2007
thanks for your feedback
matthias
Posted: Tue Nov 13, 2007 8:46 am
by Hervé
hey... could be nicer... work on the house textures a little more.. but there is one thing that kind of ruin the render... The lawn... !
I really advise you to take a look at this tutorial... your render would be a perfect candidate..
(the trees are ok..)
http://www.maxwellrender.com/forum/view ... hp?t=20883
cheers
H.
Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 3:21 am
by Bubbaloo
Building and lawn furniture look good!
The "decorations" of the scene bring the render down a bit.
I've never been a fan of pasted in trees and vegetation.
The ones you have chosen don't have good edges.
I agree on the lawn.
Scattered grass planes would be a huge improvement!
Posted: Wed Nov 14, 2007 10:37 am
by Matthias Wirth
Hi
# Hervé thanks for your tipp
# Bubbaloo i know - the 2D trees is the problem
i have xfrog in my office but the texturing from
the xfrogtrees in maxwellstudio is a big problem
thanks for you feedback
matthias
New House Rendering
Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 4:35 pm
by Matthias Wirth
Hi
i post a new house
Matthias
Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 5:13 pm
by Hervé
Nice house.. but the roof is a bit strange.. very big tiles....
Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 5:19 pm
by Bubbaloo
New rendering looks good!
What is that material on the roof?
roof
Posted: Tue Dec 11, 2007 6:14 pm
by Matthias Wirth
Hi
# Hervé thank you
# Bubbaloo when you will i can send the roofmaterial
the roofpage is
www.creaton.de productname domino
or erlus productname linea
http://www.erlus.de/index.php?lg=de&css ... true&art=3
matthias
Updated
Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 1:40 am
by Matthias Wirth
New Renderings
Matthias
Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2008 3:20 pm
by Bubbaloo
Plant's edges are looking much better.
I think you could still use some better grass, though.
Keep it up!