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Trash....
Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 9:23 am
by Mattia Sullini
Ok...why only noble architectures should deserve to be maxwellized? Even a modest dump site should be!
C&C always welcome

Shot at 2007-07-09
Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 2:28 pm
by leoA4D
Very well done - the materials and finishes are good! Your construction details are believable, too. One comment: The trees to the right are not to the same level as the building.
Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 2:58 pm
by Mattia Sullini
Gosh...i guess you are right. And maybe out of scale,too!

Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 3:15 pm
by Bubbaloo
Excellent! I think there are two things which detract from the realism. The galvanized metal material is too strong in contrast and the background trees look pixelated.
Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 4:47 pm
by simmsimaging
I don't think the issue with the galvanized metal is really contrast - its too bright overall and needs deeper shadows, but it's also too cold for the warmth of the light. Try dialling back the blue on that and they'll sit down better in the image.
Otherwise it's very good.
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Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 10:45 pm
by JCAddy
Nice render just fix those blurry trees

Posted: Mon Jul 09, 2007 11:03 pm
by firebird
perfect modelling and texturing! maybe the metal is a bit to shiny!
keep going!

Posted: Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:14 pm
by Mattia Sullini
Thanks a lot for feedback, guys. It is always useful to have someone commenting your work. I believe you all know how indulgent one can be with his own work when he is working at the same image for a long time...luckily i will have to slightly change the model, so i will have to put my hands back on this. Updates soon (and those trees will be the first ones to be substituted, i swear)
Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 12:26 pm
by Mattia Sullini
Here's the update. Added some PP details such as signs and so on. The trees on the right are still out of scale and a littl bit messed, but that was the shadow i needed on the ground and didn't have time to set new trees.

Shot at 2007-07-15
Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 12:35 pm
by NicoR44
I love it Mattia

Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 12:41 pm
by 4 HeRo
Love it
Where's thats man high vis jacket and safety boot

Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 2:19 pm
by sandykoufax
Very nice!!!

Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 3:00 pm
by leoA4D
It is getting better with age. The truck (clever!), power pole and wire are very nice touches that help improve the balance.
Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 3:15 pm
by Bubbaloo
Looking much better now! I don't know about the man in the render. The more I look at him, the more he looks like he's dancing. I guess he is just posed funny?
Posted: Sun Jul 15, 2007 4:01 pm
by iker
Great!
