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On the water

Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 7:51 pm
by Maxer
Another image of an on going project, it's my favorite so far.
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Updated Image 1-25-07

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Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 8:23 pm
by JCAddy
looks pretty slick. Just improve that grass map, add some dirt around the trees and what not and it would look much better IMO.

Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 8:27 pm
by jc4d
I like it, the sky is great and the ilum is fantastic good atmosphere, but those billboards in foreground... I don´t know (I think they don´t match with the overall image)

Cheers
JC

Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 8:27 pm
by dutch_designer
Also decrease the scale of the water waves.. the wavelengths seem too long and also wave height should be less I think.
The buildings look pretty nice I think :)

Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 9:03 pm
by Maxer
How do you guy's do your foliage? It's not feasible to use 3D trees and shrubs so what other options are there?

Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 9:22 pm
by jc4d
If the foreground has few trees you can make it in 3D (do you have some software to make 3d veg, or library?), but if you need a lot of trees put 3 or 4 3D trees in your foreground without anything else and render it and make your own billboard.
Hope I can explain well (this language barrier sucks)

Cheers
JC

Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 9:37 pm
by misterasset
jc4d wrote:Hope I can explain well (this language barrier sucks)
:lol: That was pretty clear.

Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 9:38 pm
by jc4d
:lol:

Posted: Tue Jan 23, 2007 9:41 pm
by Maximus3D
It looks fine to me, some of the other guys pointed out a couple of things which could be adjusted. Only thing tho that bothers me is the title of your work, i'd named it "On the shore" or something along those lines :) a silly detail i know..

/ Max

Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2007 6:13 pm
by Maxer
Ok guy's I've updated the image I hope this one is more to your liking.

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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 11:56 am
by Maya69
good work maxer

but i think your wave is to big

this unrealistic water

try a a little bump wave

maybe use to bump original + small bump wave


best regard