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Brooch
Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 1:51 am
by ivox3
A fairly quick, full HDR environment only shot.
My ground plane could of been a tad higher res.
Maybe a little less noise, ... but it doesn't bother me. ...I'll get the next one.
Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 2:00 am
by lsega77
nice angle and comp.
Les noise would be awesome. right now my biggest crit would be the background. right now there's very little contrast. it'd be easier to appreciate the jewelry if the detail of the background didn't interefere as much (mostly noticeable via your use DOF).
maybe make the background image a warm beige-ish kind of color... dunno.
Definitely a nice one!
Lou
Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 4:04 am
by joshh
That's beautiful. Some of the beveled edges are too sharp. I'd like to see it from the other side where the flower bud design is.
Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 9:45 am
by Hervé
very nice... but dof is kinda strong.., you could also try to lower the intensity of the Reflection channel from your Hdri..
(cool jewelery.. is it silver.. platine..?)
Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 4:54 pm
by ivox3
...basic silver H.
..thanks all, ... maybe a bit heavy handed w/the blur.
Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 6:10 pm
by JCAddy
I like this one, very nice render but I do agree that the DOF is a bit strong.
Posted: Mon Jan 08, 2007 6:33 pm
by Fernando Tella
I think the background is distracting from the main object. I would make it less contrasted.