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Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 10:19 pm
by SunlightRocker
Looks nice, but the fireplace does look, hmm, flat? And the fence outside has a white outline. AND the pillow closest to the camera stands up. And maybe the pillows looks too plastic. Other than that! Good. :D

Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 10:38 pm
by Toxie
Looks like a ray trace render

Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 10:57 pm
by aitraaz
Well bro, this pic is very different (concept & realization), and that in itself is great :)

Already looks very cool, heres a few suggestions:

1)Looks a touch washed out - either drop lighting values a bit, or play around a bit with the burn/shutter/iso etc values
2)Fix up the white cushion in the foreground, a bit rough
3)Cowhide could use a bump/normal map, the velvet preset in mxed could work very nicely
4)A touch of fabric mat/stiching on the rug, a touch too uniform
5)Check the candle flame tutorial in the tutorials section, would work very well in the firplace
6)Stone for the firepace try a bit more bump or a normal map

lol, only added that many point 'cause you've got lots of brilliant stuff (especially the table/rhino/vase/basket in the center - sofa is looking brill too), with a few adjustments will be extremely cool :)

Posted: Mon Jul 24, 2006 11:02 pm
by deadalvs
it looks «collagy» ...

something new !! yay !

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deadalvs

Posted: Tue Jul 25, 2006 5:03 pm
by ludi
try it with less light (that will give you more depth, realism)