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Escher Like Room

Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 1:34 am
by cream
Final Image at 2500px high, SL 16 cooked for about 60 hours.
Critique welcome..

Image

Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 3:45 am
by designpimp
dope... real dope

Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 3:46 am
by Jozvex
Nice work!! Very clean and airy.

Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 4:09 am
by markps
Hey I've seen the illustration but this is the real deal. Very creative and realistic render. A++

Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 8:08 am
by devista
:shock: Hypnotic :shock: great work
saludos
luis

Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 8:24 am
by Olivier Cugniet
wonderfull work ! it's very hard to make a nice "white" scene :D :P

Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 8:33 am
by jurX
...funny Idea!

Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 8:43 am
by tom
Interrior beauty! :o

Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 8:53 am
by markps
On the Escher image the stairs actually lead somewhere. And all points of view are accessible through the stairs... Your two rooms on the left seem a bit islolated like a painting on the wall. And the stair on the top left ends on the wall... It doesn't seem much functional.

Image

Posted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 8:38 am
by jotero
good work :)

Posted: Fri Jun 16, 2006 12:13 pm
by iker
I like it a lot

Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 12:35 pm
by DavidG
Hi Cream,

Your rendering is top notch, faultless really. The sense of light and the quality of the texturing is superb. The one artistic element that could really improve this illustration is attention to the composition of the elements within the frame.

At present there are two main staircases that are the dominant items, the left hand one against the wall and the zig zag one beside it to the right. They are both generally following the same direction so the composition is missing something. The eye is following each one and since both go in the same direction the eye isn't sure which one to follow. Notice on the Escher sample that markps posted, that Escher has used a triangle as his primary compositional device. The three main stairs form a triangle and this leads the eye around the page from one staircase to the next. Then he supplements the 3 primary staircases with secondary items to support the altered perspectives. In short he has cleverly orchestrated all the items to work together and lead the eye around the page and please the mind in the process.

Keep up the good work, its a really beautiful piece.

Posted: Mon Jun 19, 2006 3:22 pm
by sandykoufax
Very nice render.

How could you make your indirect image so clean? :shock:

wow!!!

Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 4:50 am
by John Layne
I like up to the point where I start to get sea sick

Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 8:56 am
by cream
Woops posted reply as new subject

Hi all, thanks for the comments.

Image is for a job and was following a layout provided
to us, so composition was out of our hands.
As for the render, it had alot of tweaking of materials to make them render efficiently, and lighting was all done with a skydome and open windows.