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How to improve this one
Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 3:43 am
by Nicolas Rivera
What do you think??? any recommendations???

Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 5:06 am
by Nicolas Rivera
another one

Posted: Sun Jun 11, 2006 12:40 pm
by dynaraton
I like the second one better. I would give some variation to the asphalt-ground cover. The backround needs something. It looks like the world ends after the grassy area. throw in a tree in the foreground edge with a tad of dof. Just my opinions.

Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 4:06 pm
by CJElven
I agree that the second one is much better. If you're going for realism (not archviz), I would probably add a little roughness to the bricks, maybe some dirt. It's VERY clean and smooth at the moment.