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CRIME SCENE

Posted: Thu Dec 15, 2005 10:27 pm
by DIA
Beta render did this in my spare time :)

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Black and white version

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Hope you enjoy it :)

Posted: Fri Dec 16, 2005 2:09 pm
by DIA
okey something must be really out of place here....hmm the first time i not get any respons at all..well well :oops:

Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 2:57 am
by ajlynn
Everybody's too busy flaming to read the gallery :)

My crits: Good use of dirt, but the crime scene tape is really stick-out-like-a-sore-thumb CG-ish. The text is too perfect and it's flat mapped.

Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 5:15 am
by misterasset
I agree with ajlynn. Maybe it's because I'm drunk but SHUT UP ALREADY ABOUT THE RC!!!

Back to your work. Very nice, love the stairs and the dirt map. The tape does need a little work. It looks like it could almost have the folds and stretch marks of plastic like that but the letters do look flat. Great work.

Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 1:32 pm
by DIA
thx m8 ! i see what you mean mayby som more wrinkels and sss will do the work?

Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 8:14 pm
by ajlynn
DIA wrote:thx m8 ! i see what you mean mayby som more wrinkels and sss will do the work?
Try that, and I'd change the font to something blockier, imperfect and less spaced out:

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And change the mapping... not sure what you're using, but uvunwrap might be what you need, or a cloth system.