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mechanical trades training facility

Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 2:54 pm
by pipcleo
pre viz for mechanical trades training facility

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Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 3:27 pm
by djflod
looks very promising :)

Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 5:41 pm
by JCAddy
Cool render so far. I also like the architecture.

Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 7:48 pm
by polynurb
JCAddy wrote:Cool render so far. I also like the architecture.
+1..

clean render & nice design, i just don't like these long angled stripes for the facade tiling on the front/left part... if we speak about the arch part of it.. i would go for a grid..

Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 9:25 pm
by Mattia Sullini
polynurb wrote:
JCAddy wrote:Cool render so far. I also like the architecture.
+1..
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+2 :D

Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 10:14 am
by pipcleo
update

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Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 10:25 am
by Tea_Bag
Great Update! I like the new lighting setup! - The lines in the road are pretty large and need to be made smaller as it makes the cars look out of scale! The trees in the bottom left corner seems odd or out of place!

Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 12:52 pm
by -Adrian
Modern and futuristic, great render.
Wonder if the last shot could benefit from some vignetting.

Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 3:07 pm
by philmartin
Really nice. The only thing that bothers me is the name of the facility. You have the huge numbers inside, which are nice, but you can't read BOX HILL... that well. That area needs some work. Overall enerything else is very good.

Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 3:57 pm
by pipcleo
Thanks for the comments guys..
Client wanted an ants eye view to dramatise the view hence a footpath that is essentially the width of a four lane road.
Buildings line the road opposite so this is the effect that was asked for....
the road is probably one hundred metres wide !
Looking at ways to fix this now ....will post a fix soon

Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 1:04 am
by JCAddy
I would think the sunlight would be coming from a more obvious angle. Right now the side that faces the camera is all dark, which bothers me.

I think the first image has a better lighting setup and gives a more contrasty interesting image.

Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 3:42 am
by pipcleo
Final image...
Jcaddy , it is a very late dusk shot that the client demanded...
Phil , signage and internal graphics a la architect.


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Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 3:47 am
by pipcleo
Adrian , agree on vignetting....
This is set to 1000 so I am not sure why the effect is so minimal.
Perhaps it does not function to its best with hdr lighting/backgrounds

Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 5:27 am
by Bubbaloo
pipcleo wrote:Adrian , agree on vignetting....
This is set to 1000 so I am not sure why the effect is so minimal.
Perhaps it does not function to its best with hdr lighting/backgrounds
Easily adjusted in Photoshop.

I like the image overall. It's a nice arch vis work. Just a personal opinion that blurry cars are too distracting.

Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 10:03 pm
by rusteberg
pipcleo wrote:Adrian , agree on vignetting....
This is set to 1000 so I am not sure why the effect is so minimal.
Perhaps it does not function to its best with hdr lighting/backgrounds
camera angle isn't wide enough to notice significant vignetting. has nothing to do with hdr