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Residence

Posted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 6:46 pm
by Asmithey
This is a work in progress. Hopefully this will be dropped into an aerial photo so please excuse the bad image map surrounding the building. It will go away.

There is still a bit of detail missing still, color and materials to make and fix and lots of landscaping to do. All the landscape I provide but most of the site modeling was done by someone else which I had to rework as it was done in Sketch Up and I use Form-Z.

Any comments appreciated.

Thanks,

Aaron


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Posted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 8:35 pm
by jc4d
I like it, in overall is very good, I would like to point you little things :)
The image have a brown tone, maybe changing the materials of the "sun beds" to white maybe and the massage tents too you can avoid that brown overall tone.
I would rework the stone walls the tiling is very obvious.
Use more bushes with some colors variations so the grass is not going to look like a plain lawn (little more landscaping).
And of course fill it with life, e.g. people, cars, etc

Cheers
JC

Posted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 8:54 pm
by Bubbaloo
Impressive amount of work there!

Edit: Decided to remove the adjustments. It's not my place. :wink:

Posted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 11:07 pm
by JorisMX
youre loosing some information after that curve, be carefull with the lighter areas, they start to blow away

also, if i may say so, try selective color adj and turn some yellow into the green, your flora is very cyan and kind of oversaturated

Posted: Tue Feb 17, 2009 7:07 am
by Asmithey
Thanks for the comments guys...

No worries Brian. I am going to adjust the exposure a bit in MR. It is a bit dull. It needs some punch. Just not in the green grass and trees :wink:

I have to work on a lot of coloring and materials yet.

Thanks,

Aaron

Hi what sort of glass are u using?

Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 10:06 pm
by nappy
Hello,

ARe u using jdhill glass? Or is it something else?

super reflective and i might need it heh.

thanks!

Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 11:59 pm
by Asmithey
I can give you the glass. You know I think I got it from the MXM site. In the material there is a layer for refraction and reflection. You just increase or decrease the blending of the reflective layer and you can make it how you want it.

Send me a PM for the material.

Do you want the ultra green grass material too!!!! :roll:

Aaron

Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 6:09 am
by Asmithey
More WIP....

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Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 4:10 pm
by Bubbaloo
Nice update. I would give that dark bronze material a roughness map for variation since that material is everywhere.