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Residence
Posted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 6:46 pm
by Asmithey
This is a work in progress. Hopefully this will be dropped into an aerial photo so please excuse the bad image map surrounding the building. It will go away.
There is still a bit of detail missing still, color and materials to make and fix and lots of landscaping to do. All the landscape I provide but most of the site modeling was done by someone else which I had to rework as it was done in Sketch Up and I use Form-Z.
Any comments appreciated.
Thanks,
Aaron

Posted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 8:35 pm
by jc4d
I like it, in overall is very good, I would like to point you little things
The image have a brown tone, maybe changing the materials of the "sun beds" to white maybe and the massage tents too you can avoid that brown overall tone.
I would rework the stone walls the tiling is very obvious.
Use more bushes with some colors variations so the grass is not going to look like a plain lawn (little more landscaping).
And of course fill it with life, e.g. people, cars, etc
Cheers
JC
Posted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 8:54 pm
by Bubbaloo
Impressive amount of work there!
Edit: Decided to remove the adjustments. It's not my place.

Posted: Mon Feb 16, 2009 11:07 pm
by JorisMX
youre loosing some information after that curve, be carefull with the lighter areas, they start to blow away
also, if i may say so, try selective color adj and turn some yellow into the green, your flora is very cyan and kind of oversaturated
Posted: Tue Feb 17, 2009 7:07 am
by Asmithey
Thanks for the comments guys...
No worries Brian. I am going to adjust the exposure a bit in MR. It is a bit dull. It needs some punch. Just not in the green grass and trees
I have to work on a lot of coloring and materials yet.
Thanks,
Aaron
Hi what sort of glass are u using?
Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 10:06 pm
by nappy
Hello,
ARe u using jdhill glass? Or is it something else?
super reflective and i might need it heh.
thanks!
Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 11:59 pm
by Asmithey
I can give you the glass. You know I think I got it from the MXM site. In the material there is a layer for refraction and reflection. You just increase or decrease the blending of the reflective layer and you can make it how you want it.
Send me a PM for the material.
Do you want the ultra green grass material too!!!!
Aaron
Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 6:09 am
by Asmithey
More WIP....

Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 4:10 pm
by Bubbaloo
Nice update. I would give that dark bronze material a roughness map for variation since that material is everywhere.