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bathroom scene
Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 7:09 am
by giacob
i am working on this bathoroom scene; i took ispiration from a magazine advertisment
I would like to have some suggestion on how to set ss on the soap on the right in order to make it look soap and some suggestion on how to improve the whole scene
Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 8:18 am
by Hervé
I love the shoes...
Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 12:06 pm
by djflod
i really like the sinks and the floor tiles ... nice start
Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 1:49 pm
by Tea_Bag
Great start! but try to reduce the overexposed illumination from the window as its killing the materials of the towels and bench! The shoes look rather large!? too - Either than those few points the rest is looking good - Cant wait to see more upadates!
Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 5:10 pm
by Bubbaloo
Great materials!
Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 6:08 pm
by fellazb
Hervé wrote:I love the shoes...
me too
Posted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 8:14 pm
by rusteberg
Hervé wrote:I love the shoes...
i don't know how she fits on that toilet..... a woman of that size could surely use an enormously large bar of soap...... which you have shown.
Posted: Tue Dec 02, 2008 12:51 am
by KurtS
great start,
as others mentioned: shoes and soap are to large.
There is something going on with the bumpmap for the floortile, like the map continues over the grouts, and the grouts should maybe have a tiny bit rounder edges. (blur the displacement map?)
Btw - I like the overexposed illumination from the window - it makes it look more like a photo and less like CG.
Posted: Sun Dec 14, 2008 6:33 pm
by giacob
an update
Posted: Mon Dec 15, 2008 10:31 am
by kami
poor cow ...
but good improvements!
Posted: Mon Dec 15, 2008 6:53 pm
by medmonds
Looking very nice... but just delete the "shoes." To me, they're such an odd design that my eye is drawn to them over and over again, and I can't appreciate the other really great things about your image.
They're too much of a distraction.
Posted: Mon Dec 15, 2008 7:44 pm
by JCAddy
I'd say along with removing the shoes, remove that cow rug.
Posted: Mon Dec 15, 2008 8:23 pm
by medmonds
MOOOOOOO! I like the cow rug. It "humanizes" the scene a bit.
I just figured out why the shoes look so weird... Its because the footbed isn't sloped up the way it would be in high-heels.
But I guess if you had high-heels on the floor in the bathroom, I'd ask "why" unless there were other items accompanying them (stockings, undergarments, etc.)
Posted: Mon Dec 15, 2008 8:51 pm
by voxelpictures
Yes, i agee with the other guys. Remove Shoes, Cow + Photo also there's no relationship with this room. Keep simple and you have the highest marks on a client presentation and least questions.
Your design is neat, stick to it. The least is better! Towels are good...try to vary the color to see matching with your envirn.