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House wip
Posted: Wed Nov 12, 2008 12:19 pm
by jomaga
I want to show you our last project, close to be built in Madrid
Hope you like it
(Downsized the original image)
Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 7:51 am
by JTB
Looks nice but I have some comments...
1. The concrete wall is very thick, is this correct?
2. The concrete material does look off scale.
3. It is not correct to see the lights on in the building, your sky declares that it is noon! Also, the interior should look darker.
4. I would like to see more contrast.
Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 9:16 am
by jomaga
Thanks JTB!, youre right in all your comments, I've noticed them too
I'll try to correct them in the final version
Posted: Thu Nov 13, 2008 10:11 pm
by x_site
... maybe it would look better if you can straighten the vertical lines, it makes your perspective look distorted and things out of scale.
Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 12:10 am
by Tea_Bag
x_site wrote:... maybe it would look better if you can straighten the vertical lines, it makes your perspective look distorted and things out of scale.
+1
Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 5:01 am
by djflod
i like the real model on your website. I really would like to see the plans.
... maybe it would look better if you can straighten the vertical lines, it makes your perspective look distorted and things out of scale.
+1
Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 3:21 pm
by jomaga
thanks djflod, are you planning to buy the house?
the plans:
Tea_Bag, x_site, you're right, I'll do it in the final version
Posted: Fri Nov 14, 2008 6:20 pm
by djflod
are you planning to buy the house?
*lol* well just curious what other colleagues are doing
il like the projekt ... but i think it deserves a better render