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interior shot-updated 30 oct-another final
Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 11:06 am
by devista
Another interior shot. Looking for a photo studio look. I must change the carpet (I know
), waiting for the displacemnet. C&C please
saludos
luis
Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 11:16 am
by NicoR44
Hi Luis,
Looking great!
! to only thing I would change is the placement of the Flat Screen Tv, now it is mounted flat on the wall, it would be nice to see it placed a little bit off the wall ( like it's floating in mid air) using some sort of mounting bracket.
Everyone already has his flat tv flat on the wall
Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 11:46 am
by pwrdesign
Looks great!
But isn't the B&W center misplaced and to small?
Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 11:56 am
by devista
thaxs guys
nico i´ll try it. pwrdesign, probably, probably, hehehe
saludos
luis
Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 2:11 pm
by ivox3
Bravo Luis ...... pretty shot.
Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 2:52 pm
by Bubbaloo
Looks great! I think the lighting could be better.
Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 5:26 pm
by JCAddy
I like it. Maybe some variation in color to one side or both sides. Slight blues / yellows maybe?
Posted: Wed Sep 26, 2007 6:44 pm
by devista
thank you.
@bubbaloo, sure
@another variation to try.
Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 5:25 am
by simmsimaging
Hey Luis -
Good start, but I agree that the lighting could use some work if your goal is to have it look like a photo-studio shot.
You need some fill/bounce on the camera right and maybe some large emitters to create some highlights/reflections to tell the viewer a bit more about the shapes and materials in the scene.
Good starting point though and already looking pretty good for a natural light image
b
Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 7:52 am
by devista
Thank you for the advice master
saludos
luis
Posted: Thu Sep 27, 2007 3:40 pm
by macitect
Luis,
Very nice shot. Nice clean arrangement. The one little thing that pops out for me as needing improvement are the three little orange candles... The one on the left has been melted too evenly and the way the 3 of them are placed just seems a little rigid. Perhaps turn one of them just a touch to add to the feeling of real "natural life" (unless of course the owner is obsessive-compulsive - in which case I imagine the candles would all have been burned the same amount.
)
But overall looking great!
cheers,
derek
Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 12:07 pm
by devista
Some small changes
saludos
luis
Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 2:44 pm
by Bubbaloo
Lighting is much improved. Good scene!
Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 11:23 pm
by killian2828
Awesome update, can't wait for the final version.
Posted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 11:41 pm
by simmsimaging
Yep, definitely a good update!
b