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kitchen-personal work-updated 21-05-07
Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 1:50 am
by devista
just a kitchen. First shot. C&C please.
saludos
luis
Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 5:37 am
by michaelplogue
Very nice. However, it looks like your post work with the background messed up the bottle on the table by the window. I'd also blur the background image a bit do give it a bit more of a DOF feel. Also, with the wood above the sink, I'd give each board a separate UV map (each one offset differently) so the grain doesn't run from one to the other. There should also be some reflection of the kitchen/dining room on the window (if there is a window). For some tips on how to do this in post, I did a quick tutorial which may help:
http://www.maxwellrender.com/forum/view ... c&start=15
Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 5:46 am
by insomnia3d
Good job. The wood looks great. i would add a lot more shine to the red, closer to what you did on the lamp. Maybe even ad some glass/stainless cabinet doors.
Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 7:06 am
by simmsimaging
Looks good. I agree you could tweak that bottle where it crosses the window, and your outdoor shot seems a bit warm for the interior I think. You could cool that off or warm up your interior so they sit better together.
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Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 11:13 am
by jomaga
Great render Luis!
Muy bueno, eres una maquina
Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 3:07 pm
by iker
Great again!
...esto me suena de algo
Buen resultado si señor!
Posted: Sun May 20, 2007 8:17 pm
by devista
thxs
. I´m working with the botle, the background (michaelplogue great tutorial) and some changes tomorrow more images.
Gracias chiquillos
saludos
luis
Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 8:42 am
by devista
some changes and a night shot.
Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 9:52 am
by contact7
Brilliant work! Loved the red material you used.
Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 9:53 am
by wingwalker
Nolte?
Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 9:54 am
by Fernando Tella
It's looking good so far. It still needs more "things" on the right side as it looks a bit empty there.
Also I think the point of view is a bit confusing; I would make two shots for this kitchen or choose another a bit more from the left that tells a bit more of the back space.
Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 11:37 am
by devista
thaxs guys
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@contac7: the red materia is one of the jomaga´s ral colors a bit modificated.
@wingwalker: nolte?
, sorry i don´t undestand
@fernando: i love the empty spaces
One more with photoshop post. (thxs Tañedor
)
Posted: Mon May 21, 2007 1:12 pm
by Hervé
hey that's a nice pretty kitchen...