WIP house
Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 6:41 pm
ahead with comments and critics!!!!!! 
It looks like the VW backed into the garage door while it was trying to open.
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Posted: Mon Jan 29, 2007 8:42 pm
I almost feel bad that I'm making the first post a joke, but...
It looks like the VW backed into the garage door while it was trying to open.
It looks like the VW backed into the garage door while it was trying to open.
Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 8:27 am
very good.... I would make 3 changes..
the car (too close from Garage door, as Mistrasset said)
The swimming pool tiles are too big..
I would loose that greyish color for the wall..
Cheers..
the car (too close from Garage door, as Mistrasset said)
The swimming pool tiles are too big..
I would loose that greyish color for the wall..
Cheers..
Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 8:37 am
Very good images... My comments:
1. The reflective copper-like material should go, I don't understand what this is.
2. The chairs at the pool are almost black... Why?
3. The VW, WATCH THE DOOOOR!
4. A better material for the road.
5. The pool is very blueish, maybe you should correct it in PS.
1. The reflective copper-like material should go, I don't understand what this is.
2. The chairs at the pool are almost black... Why?
3. The VW, WATCH THE DOOOOR!
4. A better material for the road.
5. The pool is very blueish, maybe you should correct it in PS.
Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 9:48 am
looks like your house got a hold of some protien. either that or it comes from a very strong line of genetically enhanced townhomes.
the car does look like it backed into the garage. had a good laugh over that one.
i would say your textures are what you should key in on. the scale seems a little off in certain places. but then again it is a monster house.
the car does look like it backed into the garage. had a good laugh over that one.
i would say your textures are what you should key in on. the scale seems a little off in certain places. but then again it is a monster house.
Posted: Tue Jan 30, 2007 9:49 am
for instance the ladder to get out of the pool is about as tall as the doors to get into the house.
update
Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 4:07 pm
Posted: Thu Feb 01, 2007 4:32 pm
Much better... only crit would be the mini-blinds.. maybe too white.. dunno.. you could find a sun orientation where the sun hits the blinds..
ok, now you should composite it with a nice background photo..
ok, now you should composite it with a nice background photo..
Posted: Wed Feb 07, 2007 6:00 pm
UPDATE + POSTPRODUCTION
