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Urgent, need input pls.

Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 5:49 am
by yadikrisnadi
Design was done by other, please give me input to improve the images before finalized. Pendant & Desk light by Siger Evermotion. Thanks.

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Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 7:59 am
by superbad
Are you unhappy with something specifically? Those are quite good renderings once you get past the Kim Jong-il design.

Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:05 am
by yadikrisnadi
Thanks Superbad, quick response, I am happy, but it seem not realistic (image first & second). I dont know why, Any one?

Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:15 am
by Mihai
You could add some reflections to the piano, it takes up a pretty big area of the image and it's in the center. The lighting seems a bit too even in that second pic, or is it really supposed to be like that?

Quite nice renderings :)

Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:45 am
by ivox3
I think Mihai was right on the 2nd image, ... my humble attempt.

A little desaturation/level adj.

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/9671 ... ic2wy7.jpg


I'd say overall though, ... it's good work.

Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 9:19 am
by ivox3
thanks jd, ... Nothing special, ..and I'm sure it could have probably been done a little nicer, ...but I thought the image's 'unreal' quality was the result from the saturation and wanted to give a quick example to help.

Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 9:41 am
by yadikrisnadi
Miha: Thanks for your input, I working on lighting and material for piano.
Ivox3: You are right, much better. Thanks.

Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 10:12 am
by Thomas An.
They seem like decent renders. The first two have a yellow cast, but it is possible that the real life counterpart would look like that as well (given the wall/floor colors and the emitters).
The third one looks much better, because the blue hue of the sky breaks the monotony.
yadikrisnadi wrote:Miha: Thanks for your input,
:)
Its Mihai. Mihai !
(pronounced: Me-High)

Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 11:11 am
by tom
Great interiors!

Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 1:51 pm
by yadikrisnadi
Jd, Thomas An, Tom, thank you.

Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 6:13 pm
by JCAddy
Very nice and you know it! You just wanted to hear us say it ;)

Posted: Tue Jan 09, 2007 7:35 pm
by Maya69
nice work

My opignon

for the second and three image your windows light is too small

i think the mixed beetwwen interior and sky is not good

try to up expose for give a brightness of windows

for me this a great works

Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 11:21 am
by yadikrisnadi
Hyperballad & Maya69, thanks for your visit. I am trying more work on lighing for image 1 & 2.

Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 11:25 am
by mverta
Is all the illumination coming from emitters visible, or off camera in the scene? That is, you're not using any hidden emitters, are you, or anything like that? To me, the lighting looks a bit "cheated," and is flattening things out.

_Mike

Posted: Wed Jan 10, 2007 3:03 pm
by yadikrisnadi
Thanks mverta, all lights are coming from emiters visible which square plane 4 cmx 4 cm, inside downlight's reflector, 4000 lumen @ 4000K.