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kitchen [UPDATE] 8-31-06

Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 2:47 pm
by wiz
New camera angle. I realized I forgot to model the reveals into the cabinets in the back. OOPS> I'll fix that. I see some other errors too. The stovetop appears to be one of those new "magnetic levetation" ranges.

I'm posting this in WIP, cause I'm not convinced I'm done. Comments please?

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Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 3:09 pm
by kraemerJK
Looks good so far. Personally I would add some background in the garden, maybe a hedge or a wall or something, looks like it´s the only house for many miles.

Some direct sunlight maybe, to show off that huge glass wall. There I would model some more, maybe a slim metal thing at the ceiling and the floor to hold it, I had a hard time spotting the glass. Kitchen itself is pretty good I think, it could use a little more contrast. But I couldn´t put my finger on it. It looks a bit "washed out". But still : Nice modelling, I like it.

Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 3:30 pm
by SunlightRocker
Its looking really good, but as kraemerJK said, you defenilty need to work on that glass-wall. I cant see it tough I now know its there. :P

Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 3:33 pm
by wiz
thanks guys. I agree 100% There's no reflections or glare on the glass. Actually, I shouldn't be complaining about that! :D Funny, when you want crystal clear glass, you can't get it, and when you want more contrast, it wont... I agree it looks a little flat too. I didn't do anything to it in ps, so I must have a shutter speed off or something.

Posted: Tue Aug 29, 2006 6:34 pm
by misterasset
Ohhhhh, it's a glass wall. I was going to make some joke about "The renderings not done? The house isn't done." :lol:

The glass needs some work, I thought it was a wall "hidden to camera" because of the weird dark shadow/stripe you get along the ceiling and wall. Fix that and it looks nice.

Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 12:33 pm
by wiz
updated different camera angle.