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W.I.P Office Space
Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 2:12 pm
by aitraaz
Uhh simple office space, samples reached 13 (
) in more or less 18 hrs (
). The floor is screwed...plus for lighting i think that a huge area emitter outside the window was giving best results (with physical sky it seemed a bit flat)...Its on the 3rd floor so i have do some post work (sky trees bla bla)...
Any suggestions m8's?
Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 2:24 pm
by def4d
Nice start!!!
It would be more realistic if laptops would have different bitmaps
Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 2:26 pm
by x_site
:: well done ::
Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 2:29 pm
by ludi
Nice chairs, and ambient you get through them.
Please just improve some parts.
The ground wood texture is wrong scaled. The splices seams to be as thick as a power book.
Seating surface seems (on my monitor..) too black, (like an alpha c.).
Probably you can just pick them with the Photoshop magic Pen, and brighten it up.
, no please just try to light up the seat mat.
I'm looking forward to seeing your results
greex ludi
Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 2:33 pm
by ludi
def4d wrote:....more realistic if laptops would have different bitmaps
mac's aren't individual
Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 2:42 pm
by aitraaz
yeah...the flooring is horrific...out of scale and too much bump...fabric too dark agree was trying to get some contrast into the image...
yeah the monitors good point didnt notice (
) I'll try and put some yellowdog splash screens in the background...
Cheery
Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 2:50 pm
by def4d
Ludi : sorry for my limited english, what do you mean?
Aitraaz : i didn't tell you that your render is very very good, just hope you'll add things, and a little bit of mess, like cables, and things not so 90° oriented. For my opinion, your Dof is perfect!
And i notice you have strange behaviours on ceiling lights, i had a bug like these on a render, checked geometries, but found nothing to do
(Take a look on my www, interior design close-up pic)
Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 3:07 pm
by aitraaz
Def4d: No problem mate, I agree with what you're saying...Thanks for the help
Yeah the ceiling lights, a bit strange really...BTW, great work on your www!
Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 3:49 pm
by Frances
I like this so far. I'm looking forward to seeing your progress. With so few amenities, it makes me wonder what kind of work the space is designed for.
Is the chair seat completely black (0,0,0)? Upping the value just a little will keep it from looking like a black hole in space.
Posted: Sat Aug 06, 2005 4:56 pm
by Mihai
Would you really have this kind of wood floor in an office environment though? Even if you adjust the bump and scale it down a bit, it looks odd I think.
You also have to add more detail for the window structure, and ceiling, and where are all the cables?