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critics please

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 12:02 pm
by rafi
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Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 12:15 pm
by rivoli
did you really reach sl 30?

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 12:15 pm
by tom
very critical :D

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 12:15 pm
by x_site
:: nice work... what's your plant settings? :: :wink:

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 12:16 pm
by rivoli
tom wrote: very critical :D
very science fictional i'd say.

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 12:18 pm
by bakbek
I think he means he set the samples to 30… right? what are the specs of the computer... it seems fast.

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 12:36 pm
by rafi
First of all i speak french so sorry for my english mistakes....

Yes I set it to 30 saples and i havent look to what level i came....
I am a very fresh and new user to maxwell.(1 weak)

Thus this image look realistic to you guy's??
thnx

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 1:57 pm
by Jun In Gi
especially leaf wow :lol:

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 2:03 pm
by Raffi
zis is cool render rafi .. :)

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 4:56 pm
by Mihai
Materials and light look pretty good, but something odd about composition...Doesn't make it very interesting. Maybe decrease the focal length and change the angle a bit so you feel more like you are 'there'.

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 7:08 pm
by thomas lacroix
alors tout d'abord bienvenue sur le forum, pour ce qui est de la plante elle meriterai d'etre un peu plus lisse (les polygones sont trop present) ta texture de béton et vraiment trop petite et je changerai aussi l'angle de vue... mais c'est tres joli en l'etat...


first of all welcome to the forum, well so your plant need touch up as we see to much the polys, the cement mat need to be rescaled as it is tiny and i too would change the point of view...but it is nice so far

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2005 7:32 pm
by iandavis
Rafi,

Nice start.

- Put a white panel behind the camera, it will fill in the forground details on the pot, watering can etc. Unless you like that silouette look.

- The note book looks like it has metal pages (metal being very rigid) make a bit of random curves to the pages, perhaps curl one of the page corners.

- The watering can has a really, really small opening... would take an hour to actually water a plant with that little spout. :)

- Leaf polys... true, too rough, 3x the polygons would be good. Not to mention that the leaves are floating in space, and though they are SSS they have no internal structure...

- Try SSS on the watering can... it looks plastic, a little bit of SSS would add to the image.

-What is with the grey diagonal line? Is that anti-copy watermark?

-Nice background... better then the white voids we see in many images.

-Yes, glass doesn't work properly in maxwell quite yet.