[Tea_Bag]

Hi all,

One of my recent renders, Comments are welcome! SL18 5hrs




Thanks
Tea_bag

AMD X2 4200 64
2GB DDR2 533MHZ

[deadalvs]

i like the picture, but You could pimp it some more...

proposals:

- model the upper «neck» a little more detailed, there's more volume, as i remember (visible only on the left can)
- add a nice glass with some waterpearls on it... fill it with a volume of sprite and add some bubbles... !
- try a less uniform ambiance. the contrast will profit a lot !
- maybe try a still with more DOF...

has a great potential !!

go on !

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deadalvs

[Fernando Tella]

The scene looks very good. There's something worrying in that noise though. There should be no noise at all at SL18. Maybe twicking your materials a bit it gets better; maybe the white is too white...

[Tea_Bag]

Hi,

@Fernando - Agree bout the noise at SL18 and def will play with the white as it does seem to dominate the scene abit! Thanks for comments

@deadalvs - Wow like your suggestions makes it sound so much better already! def will have a play and see what results I get!


Thanks guys!

Tea_bag

[deadalvs]

You're welcome !

go on !

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deadalvs

[JesperW]

The lying down can looks a little like it's floating in the air?

Also, it is open, in which case it will have a dent in the whatever-you-call-it lever that pushes the other-thingie into the can.

[Tea_Bag]

Hey Jesper,

Thanks for you comments - The can does look as if its floating but will play with the camera angles to sort it out! Think im going to go for a closed can render in the next one!

Thanks again,
Tea_bag

[Tea_Bag]

Hey,

Just an update of my sprite cans. Does anyone know why I have the green tint inside my glass ment to be like water trying to simulate sprite liquid. Help anyone? Im on SL 14 maybe let it cook longer?




Many Thanks

[ivox3]

Take it out of the oven, ......that's not working.

Can we see the mxm for the liquid?

Liquid should be modeled as described in this thread .....

http://www.maxwellrender.com/forum/view ... hp?t=17147

[Tea_Bag]

Yip I think that might be it Ivox3 the liquid modeling! But please can you confirm it my original sketch and mxm are seen below.





The Liquid is in red

[sandykoufax]

Your glass looks like a Bodum's.

[Tea_Bag]

The sprite can has been reconstructed Ive taken away the glass and will give it another shot! but first back to the basics! Comments welcome!





Thanks
Tea_bag

[ivox3]

Sorry Tea Bag .... I just found your screenshots. The new one looks good ....

Yeah ..We can get back into the glass later. Your model still doesn't look right ...... I'll post a wire that might help.

[Tea_Bag]

Thanks Ivox3 - Def give the glass another attempt would be boring without it! - What you think might be the part of the model that doesn't look right?
Any help will be do if it can improve my model!

Thanks

[ivox3]

This part is crucial ......