[arch4d]

entrance hall (original size 7000px, 3rd one is project overview rendered in cinema4d) i made for gmp:



arch competition 1st prize:




kind of arrangement with maximus´ highpoly models:




architecture:



workdesk design for myself:


eames chair:


glass bottles:


abstract jotero model:




terragen:
no postprcess:


with some curve tuning in ps:


interior:




beta (physical sky + sunlight):


lamp:


sina-psi:



test-scene caustics [NEW] model from frenchcinema4d.com:


caliper [NEW]:


moroso [NEW]:


hara chair [NEW]:


night scene (sss-test) [NEW] interior beachhouse:



and some sponza´s... idn´t know where to put them, so i post them here even if this is old stuff and the model from marko dabrovic:



and the truck:



interior:



lighter:



exterior:



interior:



apples:



watch:



that´s it for now.
more to come!

thanks

[x_site]

:: it is good to see it all together in one post::

[deesee]

I just love the last image. [EDIT] the one with the two orange chairs

[macray]

Great pictures but the lighter lacks some details that are apparent because of the close-up view. There is a small rim between the black part and the metal part above missing (as well as between the black part and the plastic beneath).

Gute Arbeit, gefällt mir.

[arch4d]

hi @ all,

updated post 1...

c&c welcome

[arch4d]

no comments ?

i see that over 800 people took a look at my gallery, but nobody has to say something ?

is my work that bad ?

[Micha]

It's a good work, but not realy perfect. First I would wait longer against the noise and don't use a denoiser at to low SL level.

Some ideas:

- in the interior is the black color to deep black, better user a dark grey

- lighter: the metal looks to clean and the edges to sharp (use fillets)

- exterior: the contrast looks to dull (use a lower gamma or less brightness)

- interior beachhouse: looks nice, adjust the contrast a little.

- interior: good quality, but I would place the chair more in the foreground

- apples: I feel, you forget the diffuse reflections on the red apple.

- watch:render longer, and I miss the dark tones, so Iwould adjust shutter and gamma

Maybe, the default gamma 2.2 is the main problem for the bright flat look in some cases.

Good luck.

[arch4d]

thanks a lot, micha !

i´ll keep your advices in mind for the next ones.
don´t really have the time to rework most of these test scenes,
but i´m really lucky to finally get some comments to improve my work...

btw, i know my work is far from perfect, that´s why i need comments...

[arch4d]

updated the first post with truck...

[arch4d]

and two more...

i think that´s enough for now...

[Thomas An.]

The black truck is very impressive in all shots.
I particularly like the one where we can see inside through the window. That one is excellent

[arch4d]

thanks, Thomas An.

added some new ones in first post

c&c as always very welcome

[thomas lacroix]

you should give the credits for the modeling of your "test scene caustics"...

[arch4d]

oh, thanks thomas, totally forgot it,
don´t know who modeled it, got it from frenchcinema4d.com...

[Olivier Cugniet]

beautifull